Memories preparing for GRE and TOEFL

In past few years,I wrote lots of essays preparing for the GRE and TOEFL test：argues，issues and so on.I also created many templates for them,though I could not get a high score with the help of them.The reason:Just too common.As a science student,I do not need to be adept at writing，and speed is more important during the tests.So these templtes still work for me even today,like the programming languages,such as PHP frameworks to me.If one word-efficiency.

Here is one of the articles I used to write for the test below,and most of them were just like it:

What kind of groups of peomade significant events and trends in history?The speakers asserts that people whose identities have long been forgotten,not the famous few,made significant events and trends in history,which I agree with fundamentally.However there are still some potential questions overlooked by the speaker need to be discussed.

Admittedly,it is tempting to agree with the claim that the famous few affect the history.After all,there are alot of famous people doing a lot th the world,while the percent of them in the whole is low.For instance,an apt illusion for this involves the famous scientist Galileo,who invent many useful things to promote the social progress.It is no doubt that he play an important role in the history.

However,we can not ignore the contribution of the people whose identities have long been forgotten.We can make an analogy about this:The famouse people is the flower,while other most of the people is the grass.We can not enjoy the beauty of flowers without the grass around them.Consequently,behind the famous people,there are still lots of people whose identities have long been forgotten helping them to affect the history.For example,there are a lot of famous buildings all over the world,and many people could remember the names of the people who design the architechture of the building.Neverhtless,we should not forget the contribution of more people who build them as well.

Finally,I should concede that everyone int history all affect the history.While thecontributions of different people may be different,we can ignore them.

In sum,I agree with the speaker's assertion.While a famous people play an important role in the history,but without the help of others,he can do nothing.In the final analysis,we should not only emohasis on individuals,but also not ignore the contribution of that anoymous heroes.